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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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Hi Teachers,
Please help correct my letter if there are any mistakes. Thank you very much!
Dear Editor,
I am a junior student from Central high school.
We have made a survey--"Who do you turn to when you are in trouble?" on our campus last Monday.
More than half of the students questioned said they will turn to their classmates or friends for help when they are in trouble. They believe that their friends can easily understand them because they are at the same age.
However, about 30% of the students claimed that they will tell their troubles to their teachers or parents who are responsible and have diverse experience about life, and can offer practical advice for them.
Lastly, only a few students surveyed said they would rather solve all the problems by their own than turn to their teachers or parents. Many of whom urged that they don’t have any friends; besides, they found it difficult to believe in others, even their parents.
Personally speaking, I think teenagers should ask their teachers and parents for advice when they are confronted with difficulties. Because teachers and their parents' rich life experience and knowledge could not only guide teenagers through difficulties but also help them learn from these difficulties.
Yours faithfully,
Hana Tanaka
Please help correct my letter if there are any mistakes. Thank you very much!
Dear Editor,
I am a junior student from Central high school.
We have made a survey--"Who do you turn to when you are in trouble?" on our campus last Monday.
More than half of the students questioned said they will turn to their classmates or friends for help when they are in trouble. They believe that their friends can easily understand them because they are at the same age.
However, about 30% of the students claimed that they will tell their troubles to their teachers or parents who are responsible and have diverse experience about life, and can offer practical advice for them.
Lastly, only a few students surveyed said they would rather solve all the problems by their own than turn to their teachers or parents. Many of whom urged that they don’t have any friends; besides, they found it difficult to believe in others, even their parents.
Personally speaking, I think teenagers should ask their teachers and parents for advice when they are confronted with difficulties. Because teachers and their parents' rich life experience and knowledge could not only guide teenagers through difficulties but also help them learn from these difficulties.
Yours faithfully,
Hana Tanaka
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- when they are in trouble.
- They believe that their friends can easily understand them because they are at the same age.
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