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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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Dear Debby,
How have you been recently?
I heard that many schools in your city are forced to close last week because many flu cases have been reported. My parents and I are all concerned about you. Are you alright? Has your school been affected?
There are some useful tips which I learn from flu prevention leaflets to stop flu from spreading:
Firstly, you had better stay away from flu patients and do not go to crowded places.
Secondly, wash your hands more often to keep them clean. Keep windows open and maintain good air circulation.
Finally, eating more fruits and vegetables and taking regular exercise make you fit and strong.
Flu is not that scared, as long as you follow the above suggestions.
Take good care of yourself and say hello to your parents for me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Jane
  

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nekosamaI heard that many schools in your city are forced to close last week
I heard that many schools in your city were forced to close last week
nekosamaMy parents and I are all concerned about you.
My parents and I are concerned about you.
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nekosamaThere Here are some useful tips which I learnt from flu-prevention leaflets to stop flu from spreading:
nekosamaFirstly, you had better stay away from flu patients and do not go to avoid crowded places.
nekosamaThe flu is not that sca

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