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Gillyflower Posted 10 years ago
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Could you please review the following?

"The level of dietary carbohydrate is also very important; higher consumption of simple sugars, refined grains, white bread and their food resources is related to the incidence of breast cancer through the mechanisms of blood sugar and insulin level increase and stimulation of insulin-like growth hormone secretion. Also, high-protein diet has similar effect on the stimulation of insulin-like growth hormone secretion which ultimately results in breast cancer through the stimulation of cell proliferation and the inhibition of apoptosis. This is also seen in artificially fed infants who are deprived of breast milk and have to be fed with high protein milk powder."

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gillyflower their food resources gillyflower This is also seen Please explain what you mean by the above.

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gillyflowertheir food resources
gillyflowerThis is also seen
Please explain what you mean by the above.
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By food resources, I mean various types of food that are made from these substances (sugar, ...)
By "this is seen", I mean the effect of high protein on the incidence of cancer.
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gillyflowerI mean the effect of high protein on the incidence of cancer.
Really? In infants?
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This is what is written in the articl.
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The level of dietary carbohydrate is also very important; the higher consumption of simple sugars, refined grains, white bread and their other food items made from them resources is related to the incidence of breast cancer through the mechanisms of blood-sugar and insulin-level increase and stimulation of insulin-like growth hormone secreti

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