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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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Dear Mr. Watson,
I have arrived home safely. I am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality to me during my recent stay in New York.
During my stay, I was overwhelmed by the enthusiasm by you and your family.
You have offered me a lot of practical suggestion about applying to the Central University. Besides, as an alumnus of the Central University, you also wrote a recommendation letter for me.
Thank you again from the bottom of my heart for your kind helps and I hope to have an opportunity to reciprocate your generosity.
Yours sincerely,
Mary Johnson
  

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Dear Mr. Watson, I have arrived home safely. I am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality to me during my recent stay in New York.

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  • Dear Mr.
  • Watson, I have arrived home safely.
  • I am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality to me during my recent stay in New York.
  • During my stay, I was overwhelmed by the enthusiasm and kindness shown by you and your family.
  • You have offered me a lot of practical suggestion s about applying to the Central University.
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Dear Mr. Watson,

I have arrived home safely. I am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality to me during my recent stay in New York.

During my stay, I was overwhelmed by the enthusiasm and kindness shown by you and your family.
You have offered me a lot of practical suggestions about applying to the Central University. Besides, as an
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