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It is sometimes difficult to discuss people’s views about the effect of technology on communication because it is such a multifaceted topic.
Some people seem to think that technology has make communication between people better. While others tend to think that some kinds of technology actually gets in the way of real communication.
I have also come to my own conclusion. I think technology has made communication between people better for two key reasons.
One key reason is convenience. In the past, people have to send written letter to others who live far away from them. Besides, this kind of communication also takes people a very long time to hear from each other. On the contrary, with advanced technology, there is no waiting involved as it is communication in real time. Undoubtedly, technology is of great help in making long-distance communication fast and effortless.
The other reason is price. Thanks to the advances in technology that have brought us calling cards and websites, such as fax, email, video telephone calls and social networking sites, which allow us to call one another for free. However, people have to pay a lot of money on telephone calls in the past.
In short, from the factors I have listed, I think that technology has made communication better.
Of course, there is also an argument to be made for the opposing position. Nevertheless, I feel that my opinion is built on a solid foundation.