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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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Hi Teachers, Please help correct my article if there are any grammatical mistakes. Thank you!

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Metro Daily for a news reporter on Monday, March, 1st.
I graduated with a Bachelor’s degree in Journalism in 2015. Not only do I have the qualification for this position, but I also have the right personality for a reporter. I am outgoing, optimism and good at communicating with people. I have some experiences in broadcasting and hosting in my university as well.
In addition to the required courses of my major, I also minored in Japanese, Computer Science and Business in university.
I have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experiences as well as an open letter of recommendation from Hong Kong University.
Please give me a feedback in your earliest convenience if my qualifications meet your requirement.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mary Smith
  

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Metro Daily for a news reporter on Monday, March, 1st. I graduated with a Bachelor’s degree in Journalism in 2015. Not only do I have the qualification for this position, but I also have the right personality for a reporter.

  • Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Metro Daily for a news reporter on Monday, March, 1st.
  • I graduated with a Bachelor’s degree in Journalism in 2015.
  • Not only do I have the qualification for this position, but I also have the right personality for a reporter.
  • I am outgoing, optimism and good at communicating with people.
  • ) in my university as well.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Metro Daily for a news reporter on Monday, March, 1st.
I graduated with a Bachelor’s degree in Journalism in 2015. Not only do I have the qualification for this position, but I also have the right personality for a reporter. I am outgoing, optimism and good at commu
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Metro Daily for a news reporter on Monday, March, 1st.
I graduated with a Bachelor’s degree in Journalism in 2015. Not only do I have the qualification for this position, but I also have the right personality for a reporter. I am outgoing, optimistic and good at communicating with people. I ha
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I have some experience in broadcasting and hosting programs in my university as well.

Generally, experience is non-count. It can be a count noun when it refers to specific incidents in the past which affected you.

Breaking his back in a car accident was one of the worst experiences in the boy's life.
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