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Recently, sing gender education has aroused widespread concern among the public; people differ their opinions on this heated topic. As far as I am concerned, I support with this topic and my argument are listed as follows.
First of all, single gender education has existed for over century in both China and other countries. Governments have spent a large amount of money on promoting this educational system these years. The latest study from U.S. Department of Education shows that single gender education plays a significant role in maintaining stable teaching order. It is of benefit to students, especially to male students. Boys are more likely to be impulsive during youth rebellion period; young guys always think that fighting is the only way which can help them build high self-esteem. Single-sex schools have their own special teaching methods and school disciplines which are tolerated to the students. These disciplines help to induce campus crime rate, drug abuse and underachievement. Personally speaking, I think single gender education has a positive on students’ initiative development.
Moreover, a ten-year study in Australia also found that girls in single-sex schools have more opportunities to develop leadership ability and organization skill. Besides, single gender education, to some extent, can improve the learning branch phenomenon. Girls in single-sex schools prefer to learn science subjects compared with those girls who study in mixed-sex schools. And boys in single-sex schools have more interest in arts and music.
Last, but not the least, students usually get better marks and performance because separating girls and boys for lessons can eliminate the “peacock effect” among the students.
However, everything has pros and cons, and single gender education is not an exception; its negative aspects are also apparent. Some statistics showed that some students graduated from single-sex schools have difficulty communicating with the people of opposite sex. Society is built up by both men and women. If students spend most of their time with all the people of the same sex during adolescent period, they may lose their awareness of real society.
From what has been discussed above, I think the advantages of single gender education outweigh its disadvantages. Therefore, I quite agree with the idea of single gender education.
  

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Recently, sing gender education has aroused widespread concern among the public; people differ their opinions on this heated (It is really a "hot topic" with lots and lots of controversy?) topic. As far as I am concerned, I support with this topic (You support the controversy?) and my
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Recently, single-gender education has aroused widespread concern among the public; people differ their opinions on this heated topic. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the statement that single-gender education is good for students and my argument are listed as follows.

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Recently, single-gender education has aroused widespread concern among the public in China; people differ their opinions on this topic. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the statement that single-gender education is good for students and my arguments are listed as follows.
First of all, single-gender education has existed for over centuries in both China and other countries. Governments h
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Recently, single-gender education has aroused widespread concern among the public in China; people differ in their opinions on this topic. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the statement that single-gender education is good for students and my arguments are listed as follows.
First of all, single-gender education has existed for over centuries in

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