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some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Happiness is one of vital needs of each society. Regarding this, some people believe that younge people are happier than adults while some the others are against. Discussing advantages and disadvantages of the each stage of life can make it clear which age is the happiest age of everybody’s life.
Teenagers are free of each responsibility. They are financially dependent on their parents and their parents provide all facilities for their convinience and leisure. Therefore, teenagers can enjoy their life without any responsibility and economic concerns. For instance, at teenage people spend a lot of time hanging out with their friends so they can have lots of fun and excitement. In addition to this, at younge ages people have high life expectancy because they find themselves healthier than adults. However, adolescents always complain from lack of freedom. They can not do whatever they like without having their parents permission. For example, if they want to go to a club or party they need to get permission of their parents which sometimes is annoying.
On the other hand, adults are enjoying their unlimited freedom. As long as they do not break the codes of conduct they are free to do anything. But in this age they face some other inevitable barriers for their freedom. For example, if they have children they can not go to clubs at late night or even they can not travel for long distances. In fact, their life is completely affected by their children’s comfort and security. Moreover, they are responsible to find a suitable job and support their family financially. Thus adults always complain from lack of freedom after having babies because they find themselves even less free than teenages.
In conclusion, in spite of lack of freedom at teenage, adolescents are still happier than adults considering adults responsibility and too much limitations after having children. I hope to be still at my teenage when I had too much of fun without any concerns about future.