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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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Recently, the government has announced that a large factory will be built near our community. Opinions are divided among the local residents regarding this matter.
As far as I’m concerned, there are both advantages and disadvantages are existing in this matter. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows: it can provide more job opportunity and people who live nearby may get the chance to work in the factory. Besides, many other establishments, such as cinema, café and shopping mall will be founded around the factory which makes the residents’ lives more convenient.
However, every coin has two sides. Its negative aspects are also apparent. One of the most important disadvantages is that many people will rush into our community once the factory is set up. Every where will be crowded and the noise will disturb our residents.
To make matter worse, factories can also bring about environmental pollution. Toxic gas from the factories can create acid rain which is of great harm to human, ecosystem and buildings. Water pollution is another serious problem; waste water coming out from the factories also has impact on our daily life.
In brief, from what has been discussed above, I believe the negative aspects outweigh the positive ones. Therefore, I think the plan which setting up a large factory near our community, should be cancelled.
Recently, the government has announced that a large factory will be built near our community. Opinions are divided among the local residents regarding this matter.
As far as I’m concerned, there are both advantages and disadvantages are existing in this matter. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows: it can provide more job opportunity and people who live nearby may get the chance to work in the factory. Besides, many other establishments, such as cinema, café and shopping mall will be founded around the factory which makes the residents’ lives more convenient.
However, every coin has two sides. Its negative aspects are also apparent. One of the most important disadvantages is that many people will rush into our community once the factory is set up. Every where will be crowded and the noise will disturb our residents.
To make matter worse, factories can also bring about environmental pollution. Toxic gas from the factories can create acid rain which is of great harm to human, ecosystem and buildings. Water pollution is another serious problem; waste water coming out from the factories also has impact on our daily life.
In brief, from what has been discussed above, I believe the negative aspects outweigh the positive ones. Therefore, I think the plan which setting up a large factory near our community, should be cancelled.
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As far as I’m concerned, there are both advantages and disadvantages are existing in this matter. ) and people who live nearby may get the chance to work in the factory. ) and shopping mall will be founded around the factory which makes the residents’ lives more convenient.
- As far as I’m concerned, there are both advantages and disadvantages are existing in this matter.
- ) and people who live nearby may get the chance to work in the factory.
- ) and shopping mall will be founded around the factory which makes the residents’ lives more convenient.
- However, every coin has two sides.
- Its negative aspects are also apparent.
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As far as I’m concerned, there are both advantages and disadvantages are existing in this matter. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows: it can provide more job opportunity (one job?) and people who live nearby may get the chance to work in
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Hi AlpheccaStars, Please correct it again? Thank you so much!
Recently, the government has announced that a large factory will be built near our community. Opinions are divided among the local residents regarding this matter.
As far as I’m concerned, there are both advantages and disadvantages existing in this matter. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows: it can provi
Recently, the government has announced that a large factory will be built near our community. Opinions are divided among the local residents regarding this matter.
As far as I’m concerned, there are both advantages and disadvantages existing in this matter. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows: it can provi
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nekosamaTherefore, I think the plan that a large factory will be built near our community should be cancelled.Therefore, I think the project to build a large factory near our community should be cancelled.
(The plan should be vetoed.)
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