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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
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Dear students,
I am your Head teacher, Miss. Green. I am writing on behalf of the school committee to inform you that a sports meeting will be held in the sports field on March, 25. Should the weather be bad, the sports meeting will be postponed.
Now, I need you to read the following content carefully:
There are various competition items to choose from. First, sports competitions such as badminton, triple jump, 100-meter dash and 500-meter dash can be freely chosen by individual contestants.
On the other hand, if you want to take part in the sports meeting with your friends; group applications are also welcomed. You can choose the following group competition items: basketball, volleyball, baseball, relay race and tennis.
Last, but not least, please note the application of the sports meeting is due on February 25.
I do hope all of you can participate in the sports meeting, because the first prize is a trip abroad. And everyone who attends the sports meeting will receive a secret gift. So, do not miss the precious opportunity!
Best wishes,
Mary Smith.
Dear students,
I am your Head teacher, Miss. Green. I am writing on behalf of the school committee to inform you that a sports meeting will be held in the sports field on March, 25. Should the weather be bad, the sports meeting will be postponed.
Now, I need you to read the following content carefully:
There are various competition items to choose from. First, sports competitions such as badminton, triple jump, 100-meter dash and 500-meter dash can be freely chosen by individual contestants.
On the other hand, if you want to take part in the sports meeting with your friends; group applications are also welcomed. You can choose the following group competition items: basketball, volleyball, baseball, relay race and tennis.
Last, but not least, please note the application of the sports meeting is due on February 25.
I do hope all of you can participate in the sports meeting, because the first prize is a trip abroad. And everyone who attends the sports meeting will receive a secret gift. So, do not miss the precious opportunity!
Best wishes,
Mary Smith.
Top answer
Dear students, I am your Head teacher, Miss. Green. I am writing on behalf of the school committee to inform you that a sports meeting will be held in the sports field on Marc h 25.
- Dear students, I am your Head teacher, Miss.
- Green.
- I am writing on behalf of the school committee to inform you that a sports meeting will be held in the sports field on Marc h 25.
- Should the weather be bad, the sports meeting will be postponed.
- Now, I need you to read the following content carefully: There are various competition items options to choose from.
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Dear students,
I am your Head teacher, Miss. Green. I am writing on behalf of the school committee to inform you that a sports meeting will be held in the sports field on March 25. Should the weather be bad, the sports meeting will be postponed.
Now, I need you to read the following content carefully:
There are various competitionitems options
Now, I need you to read the following content carefully:
There are various competition
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