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There are different opinions among students as to the compulsory sport planning. Some students believe that they cannot stand doing sport, especially team games. What makes things worse is that they might lose vital time to prepare for exams.
While others say taking PE class is great, because it is of great benefit to our health. From what has been discussed above, I agree with the latter opinion definitely.
On the one hand, nowadays, a growing number of students have been suffering the pressure from either study or family. Many of them are subject to psychological disease, and a recent study shows that some students who can’t meet their parents’ satisfactory, will commit suicide. PE class is a way to relieve our stress and promote students’ physical and emotional development.
On the other hand, students spend the majority of their time on studying or playing computer games, so they have less and less time to play with other students. PE class to some extent offers a good opportunity for us to make friends with each other.
Please help correct my article if there are grammatical mistakes. Thanks! ==
There are different opinions among students as to the compulsory sport planning. Some students believe that they cannot stand doing sport, especially team games. What makes things worse is that they might lose vital time to prepare for exams.
While others say taking PE class is great, because it is of great benefit to our health. From what has been discussed above, I agree with the latter opinion definitely.
On the one hand, nowadays, a growing number of students have been suffering the pressure from either study or family. Many of them are subject to psychological disease, and a recent study shows that some students who can’t meet their parents’ satisfactory, will commit suicide. PE class is a way to relieve our stress and promote students’ physical and emotional development.
On the other hand, students spend the majority of their time on studying or playing computer games, so they have less and less time to play with other students. PE class to some extent offers a good opportunity for us to make friends with each other.
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nekosama Some students believe that they cannot stand doing sport, especially team games. There are also some who don't have a problem with sport, they just can't stand doing it in school. nekosama PE class is a way to relieve our stress and promote students’ physical and emotional development.
- nekosama Some students believe that they cannot stand doing sport, especially team games.
- There are also some who don't have a problem with sport, they just can't stand doing it in school.
- nekosama PE class is a way to relieve our stress and promote students’ physical and emotional development.
- You should make it clear that this is in your opinion.
- Not everyone in the world agrees.
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nekosamaSome students believe that they cannot stand doing sport, especially team games.There are also some who don't have a problem with sport, they just can't stand doing it in school.
nekosamaPE class is a way to relieve our stress and promote students’ physical and emotional development.You should make it clear that t
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There are different opinions among students as to the whether sport should be compulsory in school. sport planning. Some students believe that it shouldn't because they cannot stand doing sport, especially team games. What makes things worse is They further argue that by doing sport they might lose vital study ti
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