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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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Hi Teachers, please help correct my article if there are any grammatical mistakes. many thanks.
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Dear John,

How’s everything with you?

Sarah invited me to attend her graduation ceremony next Sunday; I have been thinking what I am going to dress up that day. My sister advised me to try shopping online and she offered me some helpful suggestions. I bought a blue dress in an online store, which specializes in clothes, shoes and jewel for girls aged between 15 and 20. Personally speaking, I find online stores are very convenient, because I don’t need to walk along the streets but can get what I want just operating a computer. What if I feel uncomfortable wearing the dress I bought online, the owners of the online store said I can change it for a new one anytime. So I recommend you to go shopping in this online store if you need to buy clothes.

Give my best to your family.

Yours sincerely,
Mary
  

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nekosama Hi Teachers, Please help correct my article letter if there are any grammatical mistakes. Many thanks.
Dear John,

How’s everything with you?

Sarah has invited me to attend her graduation ceremony next Sunday. I have been thinking about what I am going to dress up wea
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