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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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I am from Shenzhen. Shenzhen lies the north of Hong Kong, which is the largest industrial and commercial center of Guangdong province. As a busy harbor, it ships goods between other harbors of China and other countries.
There are two main reasons for Shenzhen to be an interesting place to live. First, Shenzhen features a picturesque landscape and an enchanting night view that attract numerous tourists around the world every year. The second reason is that if you are a gourmet, you will certainly fall in love with this city. Dim Sum, various street foods and great seafood, there are not only many cook methods but the taste is absolutely marvelous. You can either enjoy the local food or take picture of local scenery.
As an ordinary student, I will make my efforts to take part in as many environmental activities as I can to make my hometown ever better.
I am from Shenzhen. Shenzhen lies the north of Hong Kong, which is the largest industrial and commercial center of Guangdong province. As a busy harbor, it ships goods between other harbors of China and other countries.
There are two main reasons for Shenzhen to be an interesting place to live. First, Shenzhen features a picturesque landscape and an enchanting night view that attract numerous tourists around the world every year. The second reason is that if you are a gourmet, you will certainly fall in love with this city. Dim Sum, various street foods and great seafood, there are not only many cook methods but the taste is absolutely marvelous. You can either enjoy the local food or take picture of local scenery.
As an ordinary student, I will make my efforts to take part in as many environmental activities as I can to make my hometown ever better.
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I am from Shenzhen. Shenzhen lies the north of Hong Kong, which is the largest industrial and commercial center of Guangdong province. As a busy harbor, it ships and receives goods to and from between other Chinese and international harbors of China and other countries.
- I am from Shenzhen.
- Shenzhen lies the north of Hong Kong, which is the largest industrial and commercial center of Guangdong province.
- As a busy harbor, it ships and receives goods to and from between other Chinese and international harbors of China and other countries.
- There are two main reasons for Shenzhen to be an interesting place to live.
- First, Shenzhen features a picturesque landscape and an enchanting night view that attract numerous tourists from around the world every year.
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I am from Shenzhen. Shenzhen lies the north of Hong Kong, which is the largest industrial and commercial center of Guangdong province. As a busy harbor, it ships and receives goods to and from between other Chinese and international harbors of China and other countries.
There are two main reasons for Shenzhen to be an inter
There are two main reasons for Shenzhen to be an inter
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