Proofreading

martinleePlease proofread the following sentence:

I have underlined the problem areas:

I have suffered pinkeyes and have to stay from any activities causing my eyes to get tired, e.g. using the computer. My eyelids swelled and my eyes are red. They turned better after taking the medicine.

Thanks
How about this:
I have suffered from pinkeyes and have to stay away from any activities causing my eyes to get tired, e.g. using the computer. My eyelids swelled and my eyes are red. They has got better after taking proper medicine.

I have suffered from pinkeyes and have to stay away from any activities causing (MM let this go, but I think it's awkward) my eyes to get tired, e.g. using the computer. My eyelids swelled and my eyes are red.

The condition is called "pinkeye" or acute conjunctivitis. It is not used in the plural form.

Thanks.
How about this:

Blue Jay:
I have suffered from conjunctiives. I have been told to stay away from any activities making my eyes tired, e.g. using the computer. My eyelids were swollen and my eyeys were are red, but they have got better after taking proper medicine.

martinleeI have suffered from conjunctiives. I have been told to stay away from any activities making my eyes tired, e.g. using the computer. My eyelids were swollen and my eyeys were are red, but they have got better after taking proper medicine.

Please proofread before you post, Martin. We should not have to correct such simple mistakes. Re-read your text