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Hrsanei Posted 15 years ago
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Hi.

I am writting a letter to my professor.

That would be kind of you to comment on it

"Dear Dr. . . .

Thanks for your email and consideration. Actually your affability in answering my emails and discussing admission issues so openly is more important than anything else.

I keep my finger crossed to have the privilege of working with you in fall.

Thanks again for your kindness

All my best

H.R. Sanei"



Feel free to make any changes to make it better

Thanks for your time and help

  

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Dear Dr [surname], Thank you very much for your emails and the consideration you have shown me. Your willingness to answer my concerns and discuss admission issues so thoroughly has been invaluable to me . I sincerely hope that I have the privilege of working with you in the fall.

  • Dear Dr [surname], Thank you very much for your emails and the consideration you have shown me.
  • Your willingness to answer my concerns and discuss admission issues so thoroughly has been invaluable to me .
  • I sincerely hope that I have the privilege of working with you in the fall.
  • Thank you again for all your kindness.
  • R.
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Dear Dr [surname],

Thank you very much for your emails and the consideration you have shown me. Your willingness to answer my concerns and discuss admission issues so thoroughly has been invaluable to me.

I sincerely hope that I have the privilege of working with you in the fall.

Thank you
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Thank you Mister Micawber for your correction.

I wish to meet you one day to thank you in person for your great helps.

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