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Hello,I would like to ask if someone is willing to check this post for me and tell me if there are some major miskates (grammar and such) and do i necessary need someone to fixes the article?Any help would be much appreciated!Thanks

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this is the post (for some reasons the link was not inserted to the original post) sorry for the inconvenience. Thanks

Tanit · Answer

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TanitHello,

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Ok but i must warn you .. it's a bit longer article. Ok here we go

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While the rest of the world is enjoying the era of Nanotechnology, Macedonia (Republic of) is living far behind the expansion of modern science and technology.
So, we cannot move forward because:

1. Our students are still studying Pascal and Java although the IT market demands technologies like ASP.NET, PHP, T-SQL, VB.NET, C# and such. As Macedonian University Professors do not want to upgrade their knowledge our students will stay “not competitive“, “not goal oriented,” and “not future-directed“. Period.

2. Macedonian companies are used to old fashion marketing using medias like Newspapers, Radio and TV. They do not pay attention to the internet marketing which is totally wrong. We need campaigns to constrain these companies to use the potential of the internet. This will cause more people to learn internet marketing, graphic design, program languages and technologies that would affect the unemployment additionally.

3. People in Macedonia use internet only for fun. Mainly they are focused on social networks like facebook and myspace, and also on several domestic portals. They are not aware that the internet is serious business tool/medium that deserves consideration in many, if not all, fields of commerce and it can offer remarkable advantages and opportunities to all of us. Someone needs to motivate and teach them to earn money on the internet.

4. Even if you want to try your luck you will be restrained immediately. Check this, even that simple thing like registering domain is pain in the neck if you live in Macedonia. Bureaucracy is killing the Macedonians! Marnet which works under Ministry of Transport and Communications, requires bunch of paper for a new domain. In addition the maximum period for the registration or renewal is just ONE year. In other words, registering domain in Macedonia will cost you an arm and a leg, unlike registering new domain(s) with godaddy which takes only 2-3 minutes and all that you need is just $7 on your Credit Card. Charm!

5. While the online payment is ussual thing in most of the African countries we are still struggling with it. Most of the Macedonian major banks are still swimming in peaceful waters avoiding the security risks. I believe that the Government should push them harder to implement the needed protections and release the online payment in that way.

6. Delivering goods is also impossible task as practically there are not delivering services. If you sell something you must deliver the items for yourself. We need a cheap delivering services that work 24/7 . Again i believe that the Government should make the needed changes to the legislative process in order to make all that possible.

In short, we need a recent and up to date education, accessible and easy registering domains, safe and widespread online payment including PayPal support and of course we need competitive online services for shipment (preparation, package tracking and delivering (something like national Fedex or DHL).

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Please at least confirm that it's not so bad! Thanks

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