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Changeling Posted 18 years ago
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I'm writing an article about fashion. Could you, please, check my sentences?
Judging your legs as too fatty or too skinny, consider not only how big of a diameter your legs are but also such judgments as their shape, length and your overall proportions. That's why some women really have to “pack” their legs in flowy pants or long skirts while others have harmonious-looking legs they don't have to hide. Just wear the clothes that help you achieve winning looks.
Thanks in advance
I'm writing an article about fashion. Could you, please, check my sentences?
Judging your legs as too fatty or too skinny, consider not only how big of a diameter your legs are but also such judgments as their shape, length and your overall proportions. That's why some women really have to “pack” their legs in flowy pants or long skirts while others have harmonious-looking legs they don't have to hide. Just wear the clothes that help you achieve winning looks.
Thanks in advance
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I'll give it a shot,, you should wait for a native speaker's advice though.. "Judging your lags too fatty or too skinny depends not only on their diameter but also on their shape and length and your overall proportions. That's why some women really have to "pack" their legs in flowy pants or long skirts while others with harmonious-looking legs can take the liberty of showing them.
- I'll give it a shot,, you should wait for a native speaker's advice though..
- "Judging your lags too fatty or too skinny depends not only on their diameter but also on their shape and length and your overall proportions.
- That's why some women really have to "pack" their legs in flowy pants or long skirts while others with harmonious-looking legs can take the liberty of showing them.
- " Hope it helps!
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I'll give it a shot,, you should wait for a native speaker's advice though..
"Judging your lags too fatty or too skinny depends not only on their diameter but also on their shape and length and your overall proportions. That's why some women really have to "pack" their legs in flowy pants or long skirts while others with harmonious-looking legs can take the liberty of showing them. Just
"Judging your lags too fatty or too skinny depends not only on their diameter but also on their shape and length and your overall proportions. That's why some women really have to "pack" their legs in flowy pants or long skirts while others with harmonious-looking legs can take the liberty of showing them. Just
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