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PreciousJones Posted 16 years ago
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Proofread paragraphs please
Hi,
I'm looking for a two or three bedroom apartment for two people, myself included. I would like to move in asap. Location of the compound isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road since I work at June Int'l building which is on the same street. I usually take line 9 to work, so it'll be more convenient if my home is close to a metro station but it's not a must.
Will there be more options if I wait till after the national holiday is over? I'm not in a rush but want to try to find a comfortable place to stay at long term, so it's essential that I like the apartment.
I've already visited apartments at Century Metropolis(Manhattan), FY, the compound across from FY, and various other communities in NYC. I'm interested in a couple of them but none of them is the ideal apartment I'd like to live in for years to come(1.5 to 2 years or maybe even more), so as of now I'm still searching for the "it" place to live. Hopefully you'll be able to end this search for me!!
Please correct and proofread. Thanks for caring!
I'm looking for a two or three bedroom apartment for two people, myself included. I would like to move in asap. Location of the compound isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road since I work at June Int'l building which is on the same street. I usually take line 9 to work, so it'll be more convenient if my home is close to a metro station but it's not a must.
Will there be more options if I wait till after the national holiday is over? I'm not in a rush but want to try to find a comfortable place to stay at long term, so it's essential that I like the apartment.
I've already visited apartments at Century Metropolis(Manhattan), FY, the compound across from FY, and various other communities in NYC. I'm interested in a couple of them but none of them is the ideal apartment I'd like to live in for years to come(1.5 to 2 years or maybe even more), so as of now I'm still searching for the "it" place to live. Hopefully you'll be able to end this search for me!!
Please correct and proofread. Thanks for caring!
Top answer
I have underlined some problem areas: I'm looking for a two or three bedroom apartment for two people , myself included . I would like to move in asap . Location of the compound isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road since I work at June Int'l building which is on the same street.
- I have underlined some problem areas: I'm looking for a two or three bedroom apartment for two people , myself included .
- I would like to move in asap .
- Location of the compound isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road since I work at June Int'l building which is on the same street.
- I usually take line 9 to work, so it'll be more convenient if my home is close to a metro station but it's not a must.
- Will there be more options if I wait till after the national holiday is over?
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I have underlined some problem areas:
I'm looking for a two or three bedroom apartment for two people, myself included. I would like to move in asap. Location of the compound isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road since I work at June Int'l building which is on the same street. I usually take line 9 to work, so it'll
I'm looking for a two or three bedroom apartment for two people
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Could please correct it for me Mister M? Thank you for your support!
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No; you would learn little that way. Please make an effort to correct the problems and post your revised version.
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Hi,
I'm looking for a two or three bedroom apartment for two people. I would like to move in as soon as possible. Location of the apartment isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road, since I work at June International building, which is on the same street. I usually take line 9 to work, so it will be more convenient if my home is clos
I'm looking for a two or three bedroom apartment for two people. I would like to move in as soon as possible. Location of the apartment isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road, since I work at June International building, which is on the same street. I usually take line 9 to work, so it will be more convenient if my home is clos
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That's better, PJ. I've finished it up:
I'm looking for a two- or three-bedroom apartment for two people. I would like to move in as soon as possible. Location of the apartment isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road, since I work at June International Building, which is on the same street. I usually take line 9 to work, so it'll (OK) be mo
I'm looking for a two- or three-bedroom apartment for two people. I would like to move in as soon as possible. Location of the apartment isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road, since I work at June International Building, which is on the same street. I usually take line 9 to work, so it'll (OK) be mo
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Wow, thanks Mister Micawber! I'm a better writer than i thought!!!! I mean, i'm not all that educated, but asking questions on this site really does work!
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