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This manuscript is on character creation principle of Park Kyoung Ri's novel, and her writer-consciousness through exploring ?The Land? 's expansion aspect. The character of Park Kyoung Ri's novel is materialization of a seeker of love, a skeptic, and a society's wrongdoer, and the ?The Land?is written with the motif of a will to overcome fate, and recognition of a will to survive.

First, the female protagonists of Suh Hee Ryu‘s kind of ?The Land?, who are named to be seekers of life, change, improve, and mature through deficiency of being a human and associated frustrations, to the author's character ideal. ?Age of Distrust?'s Gee Young, ?Kim Pharmacy's Girls?'s Yong Bin, ?A Seasonal Fish Market?'s Myoung Hwa, ?Phyo Ryu Do?'s Hyun Hway, etc, are characters who are included in this idea.

Second is Wall Sun Ryu's seeker of love model. To Park Kyung Ri, romantic love is a unique virtuous quality that humans possess which is a fountain of life.

Therefore the author tries to search for the true seeker of love who has overcome human's inadequacy and limitations. Through the maturation process of a war, the author felt keenly that a life without self-consciousness is useless, and as a passion for self-realization, she was obsessed with romantic love, and expressed that through her characters.

Third is about skeptics like Lee Sang Hyun. In Park Kyung Ri's novel, the skeptic model is multi-faceted conveying life's complexity. The character Ung Jun from ?A Seasonal Fish Market? is portrayed as a skeptical intellectual who couldn't protect Myoung Hwa, and at a loss, between the terrors of war and a new lover.

Fourth is the society's wrongdoer model. In ?Kim Pharmacy's Girls?, Yong Oak's wife's father, elderly man Suh, rapes his daughter-in-law Yong Oak while his son Gi Sue is not around, and Yong Oak is nearly driven to death.

?The Land? was completed in the process of Park Kyung Ri’s novel becoming a modern self’s actualization in 6.25. In the vain of the author's statement that all her previous works were study materials, The Land?is Park Kyung Ri's greatest literary work cohering all of her ideas and creativity.

Ultimately, Park Kyung Ri’s novels can be categorized into the early days of short novels in the 50’s, 60’s long novels, and ?The Land?. Therefore the characters of ?The Land? can be considered as expansion of the character models of her earlier works. The characters of the novel contribute to the novel’s fictional aspects, and bring about unique esthetic effects. Park Young Ri’s character creation principle is expanded as ?The Land? through the two motifs - of a will to overcome life, and a will to survive.