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Surfer Posted 5 years ago
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Hi, ..


Is the following sentence correct?

"A plan to organize transportation across the border between both our countries was set in motion. However, less than optimal logistics on the other side during the first 24 hours necessitated that our team delay outgoing traffic off predetermined schedule."



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Surfer Is the following sentence correct? There are two sentences, and no. Surfer "A plan to organize transportation across the border between both our countries was set in motion.

  • Surfer Is the following sentence correct?
  • There are two sentences, and no.
  • Surfer "A plan to organize transportation across the border between both our countries was set in motion.
  • It's not between both.
  • " Surfer However, less than optimal logistics on the other side during the first 24 hours necessitated that our team delay outgoing traffic off predetermined schedule.
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SurferIs the following sentence correct?

There are two sentences, and no.

Surfer"A plan to organize transportation across the border between both our countries was set in motion.

It's not between both. "A plan to organize transportation across the border between our two countries was set in motion."

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