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Hi, ..

Could you please take a look at the following paragraph? I intend it as a review for a recent shop inside one of the local malls where I live. Here's:

"A very large shop for your personal and household electro needs. Definitely deserves a visit. It's worth noting here that, IMO, this shop deserves more attention and, susequently, customers than it's been getting, only if it wasn't for the minimally open and visited extension where it exists inside the mall."

Is it correct and understandable?

Thank you.