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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
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Proofread my writing please?

A school magazine to be implemented for the first time in the local Russian authoritarian school.
Victor school one of the local authoritarian school in Russia is distributing its very first school magazine causing a huge cut-down on school budget. Consequently, less food choice in the cafeteria and more facilities to be removed.
The first edition of the magazine will be publicly available on the 18th of June.

  

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mosja Victor school one of the local authoritarian school in Russia schools mosja causing a huge cut-down on school budget. This is awkward. It would be more natural to write a huge reduction in the school's budget .

  • mosja Victor school one of the local authoritarian school in Russia schools mosja causing a huge cut-down on school budget.
  • This is awkward.
  • It would be more natural to write a huge reduction in the school's budget .
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mosjaVictor school one of the local authoritarian school in Russia

schools

mosjacausing a huge cut-down on school budget.

This is awkward. It would be more natural to write a huge reduction in the school's budget.

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mosjaRussian authoritarian school

This is not the correct expression.

Do you mean a military school? A military academy? A boarding school? A public or private school? A school operated by the government of Russia?

I ask because in English we have no such thing as an authoritarian school.

Is "authoritarian" just your personal opinion of

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