Proofread my thoughts about Essex please?
I had been living in Essex for six years (not living now) and it was great. The weather was drier than Asia, it rained sometimes which considered to be the best weather ever. Also, there was less crime because Essex is located in the outskirts of London so you don't have to worry when going places. Moreover, state schools in Essex were quite competitive, but that is splendid because most students have got high exam results and they have more opportunity to go to top universities such as Cambridge, MIT etc. Unemployment is very low so you are unlikely to lose your jobs in Essex.
It is not as bad as most outsiders thought. Most of them think that Essex is a rural and rubbish. If you have living there, you will know how magnificent Essex is.
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mosja I had been living in Essex for six years It's clear that this refers to the past so, you don't need the next part. mosja ( not living now ) Delete this. mosja The weather was drier tha n A sia, You missed including in .
- mosja I had been living in Essex for six years It's clear that this refers to the past so, you don't need the next part.
- mosja ( not living now ) Delete this.
- mosja The weather was drier tha n A sia, You missed including in .
- It would make more sense if you give an idea of where in Asia you mean, considering that continent includes deserts which are drier than Essex.
- mosja whic h c onsidered to be the best weather ever.
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mosjaI had been living in Essex for six years
It's clear that this refers to the past so, you don't need the next part.
mosja(not living now)
Delete this.
mosjaThe weather was drier than Asia,
You missed including
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