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Ruriko Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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0 Hi can anyone proofread my speech? 02 br
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00 My project is going to be on Trickster Online. Trickster Online is a MMORPG. MMORPG stands for massive multiplayer online role-playing game it is a type of game genre. MMORPGs are online role-playing multiplayer games which allow thousands of gamers to play in the game's evolving virtual world at the same time via the Internet. 02 br
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00 My objective to this project is to create a informative CD-Rom that should allow new users to have some indepth experience of the game "Trickster Online". 02 br
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00 It will have about 14 pages or more. Almost every page will have images but I will try not to flood it with pictures. It contains 2 interfaces. One is the home page and the other one is when you click on one of the sections it will have it's own layout. It will contain a video clip and it's a trailer but it's in Korean so If I can find someone who knows Korean I might be able to translate it. The video clip is in a AVI format. I don't have a powerful computer to capture the game so I decided to download the video clip from the official site. It will contain some music. 02 br
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01 b 00 Interactive Elements 02 b 02 br
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00 The navigation will have a rollover effect. I'll be adding a sound control bar at the bottom of the interface so the user can freely disable the music whenever he/she wants. It will have some animations in some pages. It will also have a puppet transitions. 02 br
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00 My target audience is target to age 10 and up. I plan to make it able to run on a slow computer. I also hope most users have a CD drive at the speed of 52x or else it would run a bit slow. The resolution will be 1024 by 768 so it should be full screen. It will not have a title bar but it will have a exit bottom on the interface. 0-
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01 b 00 Background/Concept 02 b 02 br
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00 My project is going to be on Trickster Online. Trickster Online is a MMORPG. MMORPG stands for massive multiplayer online role-playing game it is a type of game genre. MMORPGs are online role-playing multiplayer games which allow thousands of gamers to play in the game's evolving virtual world at the same time via the Internet. 02 br
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00 My objective to this project is to create a informative CD-Rom that should allow new users to have some indepth experience of the game "Trickster Online". 02 br
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01 b 00 Content (including multimedia elements) 02 b 02 br
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00 It will have about 14 pages or more. Almost every page will have images but I will try not to flood it with pictures. It contains 2 interfaces. One is the home page and the other one is when you click on one of the sections it will have it's own layout. It will contain a video clip and it's a trailer but it's in Korean so If I can find someone who knows Korean I might be able to translate it. The video clip is in a AVI format. I don't have a powerful computer to capture the game so I decided to download the video clip from the official site. It will contain some music. 02 br
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01 b 00 Interactive Elements 02 b 02 br
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00 The navigation will have a rollover effect. I'll be adding a sound control bar at the bottom of the interface so the user can freely disable the music whenever he/she wants. It will have some animations in some pages. It will also have a puppet transitions. 02 br
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01 b 00 Platform 02 b 02 br
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00 My target audience is target to age 10 and up. I plan to make it able to run on a slow computer. I also hope most users have a CD drive at the speed of 52x or else it would run a bit slow. The resolution will be 1024 by 768 so it should be full screen. It will not have a title bar but it will have a exit bottom on the interface. 0-
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0 Took a look at a couple of paragraphs. g. 02 br 00 How about: No title bar will be available on xyz, but an "exit" buttom will be provided on the interface.
- 0 Took a look at a couple of paragraphs.
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- 02 br 00 How about: No title bar will be available on xyz, but an "exit" buttom will be provided on the interface.
- 12 br 12 br 11 b 10 Background/Concept 12 b 12 br 12 br 10 MMORPG stands for massive multiplayer online role-playing game 11 b 10 (you need a pause here) 12 b 10 it is a type of game genre.
- ) will have about 14 pages or more.
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0 Took a look at a couple of paragraphs. I suggest you rewrite some of your sentences so they don't start with an ambiguous "it". 02 br
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00 e.g. It will not have a title bar but it will have a exit bottom on the interface. 02 br
00 How about: No title bar will be available on xyz, but an "exit" buttom will be provided on the interface. (something like that) 01 block
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00 e.g. It will not have a title bar but it will have a exit bottom on the interface. 02 br
00 How about: No title bar will be available on xyz, but an "exit" buttom will be provided on the interface. (something like that) 01 block
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