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Pawcio Posted 22 years ago
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Proofread my business letter please..

I recently read the October 11 edition of the Milwaukee Journal Sentinal and saw an ad that stated you were currently hiring for the position of food server. Due to my prior experiences and skills, I believe I am the ideal candidate for this position.

Let me tell you a little bit about myslef. I am 3.0 G.P.A student. I speak both English and Polish fluently. I am a very reliable and responsible person. My interpersonal skills are exceptional. I had served food during the games in my school. In my past I worked at Burger King and Omega's Restaurant. All of these position involved food serving. Therefore, I will have no problems getting along with customers or getting the job done.

Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I would appreciate a personal interview to discuss more about the position. I may be reached at (414) 555-5555. I look forward to hearing from you at you earliest convenience.
  

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Dear X: I read in the October 11 edition of the Milwaukee Journal Sentinal that you are currently hiring food servers. I believe I am the ideal candidate for this position because of my skills and experience. A student at X school/university who speaks both English and Polish fluently.

  • Dear X: I read in the October 11 edition of the Milwaukee Journal Sentinal that you are currently hiring food servers.
  • I believe I am the ideal candidate for this position because of my skills and experience.
  • A student at X school/university who speaks both English and Polish fluently.
  • I am a very reliable, punctual, and responsible person.
  • I have exceptional interpersonal skills.
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Dear X:

I read in the October 11 edition of the Milwaukee Journal Sentinal that you are currently hiring food servers. I believe I am the ideal candidate for this position because of my skills and experience.

I am 3.0 G.P.A student at X school/university who speaks both English and Polish fluently. I am a very reliable, punctual, and responsible person. I have exceptional int

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