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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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proofread it for me pls
is the following sentence correct in every aspect(grammer, collocation, wording etc)?
Within a period of as long as 25 minutes, the driver failed to realize that he was driving in the opposite direction.
Within a period of as long as 25 minutes, the driver failed to realize that he was driving in the opposite direction.
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It seems grammatically correct, but awkward. I would change the introductory prepositional phrase to: For up to 25 minutes, the driver failed to realize that he was driving in the opposite direction .
- It seems grammatically correct, but awkward.
- I would change the introductory prepositional phrase to: For up to 25 minutes, the driver failed to realize that he was driving in the opposite direction .
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It seems grammatically correct, but awkward. I would change the introductory prepositional phrase to:
For up to 25 minutes, the driver failed to realize that he was driving in the opposite direction.
For up to 25 minutes, the driver failed to realize that he was driving in the opposite direction.
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