[Proofread] Essay about natural selection.

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How organisms still alive today? Because they survived. There is something behind it. It is called natural selection.
Natural selection helps organism to live with any kind of circumstances. For instance, a dog which never stay in a cold place before get used to the north pole. Natural select relies on phenotype and mutation where the genome generates randomly causing variation. The more variant the more chance the organism will survive and remain its species.

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How organisms still alive today? <<< This sentence has no verb.

Because they survived. <<< This sentence has no main clause.

There is something behind it. It is called natural selection. <<< You need to join these short sentences
Natural selection helps organisms to live in ~~with~~ any kind of circumstances. For instance, a dog which never stay in a cold place before get used to the north pole.<<< This sentence has no main clause

Natural select relies on phenotype and mutation where the genome generates randomly causing variation. The more variant the more chance the organism will survive and

remain its species. <<< what does this mean?

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