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Someone please proofread the following sentence I translated into English:
We've become a more exciting shop than before with good old-fashioned Japanese sweets and recently added new type of sweets.
Japanese sweets are not only being enjoyed tasting, but also enjoyed watching. So Japanese sweets are Japanese spirit.
Why don't you drop by once ?
We are looking forward to seeing you with the spirit of hospitality.
Please feel free to visit us.
That's it. Also I want to know how polite the phrase "why don't you ~? " is because the original sentence is relatively polite.
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Japanese sweets are not only being enjoyed tasting, but also enjoyed watching. Please feel free to visit us. We've become a more exciting shop, with both good, old-fashioned Japanese sweets and new kinds of sweets.
- Japanese sweets are not only being enjoyed tasting, but also enjoyed watching.
- Please feel free to visit us.
- We've become a more exciting shop, with both good, old-fashioned Japanese sweets and new kinds of sweets.
- Japanese sweets are not only delicious, but also attractive.
- Japanese sweets reflect the Japanese spirit.
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