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Hi, I really appreciate if someone proofread my writing below, thank you in advance.
1. The happiness of a young couple on their honeymoon is disturbed by the wife's nightmares which reinforce the wife's sense of unease and cause her to doubt her husband's fidelity.
2. When two kids become students to the once renowned singer Johnny, whose career is at low ebb, he has great hopes on them and he vowed to make them become the best of the best.
3. A group of youngsters go on a camping trip in the countryside, where Ken encounters a mysterious woman near a grave. His life is changed since then as he becomes a victim of ghost-meddling.
4. A hot-headed inspector takes on a small but powerful Vietnamese-Chinese gang, after a series of crimes and murder attempts committed and putting an undercover cop and his girlfriend in great danger.
5. Fashion designer Man is forced to assume his twin brother Kit's identity after Kit into a horrendous accident that lands him in a coma.
1. The happiness of a young couple on their honeymoon is disturbed by the wife's nightmares which reinforce the wife's sense of unease and cause her to doubt her husband's fidelity.
2. When two kids become students to the once renowned singer Johnny, whose career is at low ebb, he has great hopes on them and he vowed to make them become the best of the best.
3. A group of youngsters go on a camping trip in the countryside, where Ken encounters a mysterious woman near a grave. His life is changed since then as he becomes a victim of ghost-meddling.
4. A hot-headed inspector takes on a small but powerful Vietnamese-Chinese gang, after a series of crimes and murder attempts committed and putting an undercover cop and his girlfriend in great danger.
5. Fashion designer Man is forced to assume his twin brother Kit's identity after Kit into a horrendous accident that lands him in a coma.
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" #2 - When two kids become students of the once renowned singer Johnny, whose career is at a low ebb, he has great hopes for them and he vows to make them become the best of the best. ) #3 - His life is changed after that as he becomes a victim of ghost-meddling. #4 - A hot-headed inspector takes on a small but powerful Vietnamese-Chinese gang after a series of crimes and murder attempts were committed, putting an undercover cop and his girlfriend in great danger.
- " #2 - When two kids become students of the once renowned singer Johnny, whose career is at a low ebb, he has great hopes for them and he vows to make them become the best of the best.
- ) #3 - His life is changed after that as he becomes a victim of ghost-meddling.
- #4 - A hot-headed inspector takes on a small but powerful Vietnamese-Chinese gang after a series of crimes and murder attempts were committed, putting an undercover cop and his girlfriend in great danger.
- #5 - Fashion designer Man is forced to assume his twin brother Kit's identity after Kit's horrendous accident that lands him in a coma.
- (Is the fashion designer named Man?
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#1 - Put a comma before "which."
#2 - When two kids become students of the once renowned singer Johnny, whose career is at a low ebb, he has great hopes for them and he vows to make them become the best of the best. (I made several changes for you.)
#3 - His life is changed after that as he becomes a victim of ghost-meddling.
#4 - A hot-headed inspector takes on a small but powerful Vi
#2 - When two kids become students of the once renowned singer Johnny, whose career is at a low ebb, he has great hopes for them and he vows to make them become the best of the best. (I made several changes for you.)
#3 - His life is changed after that as he becomes a victim of ghost-meddling.
#4 - A hot-headed inspector takes on a small but powerful Vi
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Hi, I would really appreciate it if someone proofread my writing below. Thank you in advance.
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