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It sunny yesterday I and my hubby we went out for picnic at Sandgate we had sausages toast tomota onion and it was lovely please can correct this?
  

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Because the weather was so sunny yesterday, my hubby and I went out for a picnic at Sandgate. We had sausages, toast, tomato, and onion. It was lovely.

  • Because the weather was so sunny yesterday, my hubby and I went out for a picnic at Sandgate.
  • We had sausages, toast, tomato, and onion.
  • It was lovely.
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Because the weather was so sunny yesterday, my hubby and I went out for a picnic at Sandgate. We had sausages, toast, tomato, and onion. It was lovely.
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Could also use the word "since" instead of " because."
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I think a better way for the meaning to come across would be - The weather was so sunny yesterday, and, my hubby and I went out for a picnic at Sandgate. We had sausages, toast, tomato, and onion. It was lovely.
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Anonymoustomato, and onion.
tomatoes, and onions.
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It sunny yesterday I and my hubby we went out for picnic at Sandgate

The way I read this, it sounds like you and your husband noticed what a lovely day it was and decided at that moment that you ought to have a picnic. So, I will edit this for you, bit by bit, based on a "short-term condition or action". Follow along as we reconstruct
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It was sunny yesterday. My hubby and I went out for a picnic at Sandgate. We had sausages, toast, tomato and onion. It was lovely.
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AnonymousIt was sunny yesterday. My hubby and I went out for a picnic at Sandgate. We had sausages, toast, tomato and onion. It was lovely.
I'd say it thus (which is nearly the same as your version):

It was sunny yesterday so my husband and I went out for a picnic at Sandgate. We had sausages, toast, tomatoes, and onions. It was lovely.

CJ
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I think it is not because it is used for formal writing
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Anonymous I think it is not because it is used for formal writing
What do you mean Anon?
What is used formal writing in your opinion?
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It was sunny yesterday, so my husband and I went out for a picnic at Sandgate. We had sausages, toast, tomatoes and onions. It was lovely.
Note: there is no comma before "and onions".

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