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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Hi, can someone please check these paragraph and let me know if these are any mistakes?
Short plot
After losing his memory in an accident, a young man tries to find his identity. He does not know who he is and where his family is. Eventually, he finds something that leads him back to his home.
Long plot
After a tragic accident, Tan loses his memory, remembering only his name. One day, he finds something that leads him back to his home. There, he meets his twin sister Tubtim, who is currently living with Chiwin, a widower with two kids. As Tan gradually gets to know all of these people, he begins to fear them, and even when he tries to escape from the house, he is unable to as he gets pulled in by the fearsome truth.
Short plot
After losing his memory in an accident, a young man tries to find his identity. He does not know who he is and where his family is. Eventually, he finds something that leads him back to his home.
Long plot
After a tragic accident, Tan loses his memory, remembering only his name. One day, he finds something that leads him back to his home. There, he meets his twin sister Tubtim, who is currently living with Chiwin, a widower with two kids. As Tan gradually gets to know all of these people, he begins to fear them, and even when he tries to escape from the house, he is unable to as he gets pulled in by the fearsome truth.
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Hi, can someone please check these paragrap hs and let me know if these there are any mistakes? Short plot After losing his memory in an accident, a young man tries to find his identity. He does not know who he is and nor where his family is.
- Hi, can someone please check these paragrap hs and let me know if these there are any mistakes?
- Short plot After losing his memory in an accident, a young man tries to find his identity.
- He does not know who he is and nor where his family is.
- Eventually, he finds something that leads him back to his home.
- Long plot After a tragic accident, Tan loses his memory, remembering and only remembers his name.
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Hi, can someone please check these paragraphs and let me know if these there are any mistakes?
Short plot
After losing his memory in an accident, a young man tries to find his identity. He does not know who he isand nor where his family is. Eventually, he finds something that leads him back to his home.
Long plot
After a tragic
Short plot
After losing his memory in an accident, a young man tries to find his identity. He does not know who he is
Long plot
After a tragic
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Actually I wanted to say that "when Tan knows about them, the more he learns to fear of their secrets of his so-called family" or " the more he knows, the more he learns to fear of the secrets of that place called home"
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That still doesn't explain why he "gets pulled"or is unable to leave!
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Basically, he is unable to go out from the house because of the fearful secrets.
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AnonymousTan gradually gets to know all of these people, he begins to fear them, and even when he tries to escape from the house, he isunable to as he gets pulled inheld back bythethat overwhelming sense of fear.some truth.
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Try this teechr:
After a tragic accident, Tan loses his memory and only remembers his name. One day, he bumps into his twin sister, Tubtim, who is currently living with her partner, a widower with two children. As Tan gradually gets closer with the family, the more he fears them. It leaves Tan deeply disturbed, that when he tries to escape, he gets held back by the overwhelming sense of f
After a tragic accident, Tan loses his memory and only remembers his name. One day, he bumps into his twin sister, Tubtim, who is currently living with her partner, a widower with two children. As Tan gradually gets closer with the family, the more he fears them. It leaves Tan deeply disturbed, that when he tries to escape, he gets held back by the overwhelming sense of f
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Hi teechr,
Asking your opinion about the sentence structure. Is this good?
After a tragic accident, Tan loses his memory and only remembers his name. One day, he bumps into his twin sister, Tubtim, who is currently living with her partner, a widower with two children. As Tan gradually gets closer with the family, the more he fears them. It leaves Tan deeply disturbed, that when h
Asking your opinion about the sentence structure. Is this good?
After a tragic accident, Tan loses his memory and only remembers his name. One day, he bumps into his twin sister, Tubtim, who is currently living with her partner, a widower with two children. As Tan gradually gets closer with the family, the more he fears them. It leaves Tan deeply disturbed, that when h
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AnonymousAs Tan gradually gets closerwithto the family, he starts tothe more hefear them more and more. It leaves Tan deeply disturbed, and that's when he tries to escape, but he gets held back by the overwhelming sense of fear.
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