0
Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Proofread
Hi, can someone please help me to check whether this sentence is grammatically correct?
Nobita and his gang's escapade through time, 70,000 years ago. Shortly as they arrive in what-is-supposedly Japan, they realize that they miss home, so they get on board on the ship to return to the 20th century, only to realize that a cave boy has broken and boarded the ship as well. As Nobita and the gang drop him home, they have to instead fight for the boy's trible, which has been attacked and abducted by a king of spirits and a rivaled tribe.
Nobita and his gang's escapade through time, 70,000 years ago. Shortly as they arrive in what-is-supposedly Japan, they realize that they miss home, so they get on board on the ship to return to the 20th century, only to realize that a cave boy has broken and boarded the ship as well. As Nobita and the gang drop him home, they have to instead fight for the boy's trible, which has been attacked and abducted by a king of spirits and a rivaled tribe.
Top answer
Nobita and his gang's escapade through time, 70,000 years ago. ) Shortly as they arrive in what-is-supposedly Japan, they realize that they miss home, so they get on board on the ship to return to the 20th century, only to realize that a cave boy has broken in and boarded the ship as well. As Nobita and the gang drop him off at home, they have to instead (with "instead" you need two choices.
- Nobita and his gang's escapade through time, 70,000 years ago.
- ) Shortly as they arrive in what-is-supposedly Japan, they realize that they miss home, so they get on board on the ship to return to the 20th century, only to realize that a cave boy has broken in and boarded the ship as well.
- As Nobita and the gang drop him off at home, they have to instead (with "instead" you need two choices.
- ) which has been attacked and abducted by a king of spirits and a rival tribe.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
5 Answers
0
Nobita and his gang's escapade through time, 70,000 years ago. (Is that the title of your story?)
Shortly as they arrive in what-is-supposedly Japan, they realize that they miss home, so they get on boardon the ship to return to the 20th century, only to realize that a cave boy has broken in and boarded the ship as well. As Nobita and the gang drop him off a
Shortly as they arrive in what-is-supposedly Japan, they realize that they miss home, so they get on board
00
AlpheccaStarsNobita and his gang's escapade through time, 70,000 years ago. (Is that the title of your story?)That wasn't the title. Is that line not appropriate?
00
It's OK as a title. Otherwise it needs to be 'escape'. 'Escapade; is not a verb.
00
Ok. I will replace with escape. How about run away?
Would be: Nobita and his gang's run away through time, 70,000 years ago.
Would be: Nobita and his gang's run away through time, 70,000 years ago.
00
AnonymousThat wasn't the title. Is that line not appropriate?It's not a sentence. It is a noun phrase with "escapade."
Nobita and his gang go on an escapade through time, 70,000 years ago.
By the way, according to the latest science, Nobita arrives about 40,000 years before the first groups of **** sapiens reached Japan. Did y
0
Related Questions