0
Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

proofread

Hi , is this sentence correct?

As a down-on-luck delivery pizza man refuses to answer his call to a terrifying house, his bossy manager instead puts his only job in the line. What he does not know is, he is about to face a life-threatening peril as the house turns out to be a nest of frightening ghouls who wants to imprison him forever.
  

Top answer

As a down-on-his-luck pizza delivery man refuses to answer a call to a terrifying house, his bossy manager puts his job on the line. What he does not know is that he is about to face deadly peril, as the house turns out to be a nest of frightening ghouls who want to imprison him forever.

  • As a down-on-his-luck pizza delivery man refuses to answer a call to a terrifying house, his bossy manager puts his job on the line.
  • What he does not know is that he is about to face deadly peril, as the house turns out to be a nest of frightening ghouls who want to imprison him forever.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
As a down-on-his-luck pizza delivery man refuses to answer a call to a terrifying house, his bossy manager puts his job on the line. What he does not know is that he is about to face deadly peril, as the house turns out to be a nest of frightening ghouls who want to imprison him forever.

Related Questions