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Surfer Posted 11 years ago
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Hello, ..

Could you please check the following for me?

"He's rather decisive and tricky by nature, for he always adjusts his speech to try and tilt others's perspective for things towards being more aligned with his hidden plots and goals.. ."

Thank you.
  

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Surfer He's rather decisive and tricky by nature, for he always adjusts his speech to try and tilt othe rs' perspective for on things towards being more aligned to be more in line with his (own) hidden plots and goals.

  • Surfer He's rather decisive and tricky by nature, for he always adjusts his speech to try and tilt othe rs' perspective for on things towards being more aligned to be more in line with his (own) hidden plots and goals.
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SurferHe's rather decisive and tricky by nature, for he always adjusts his speech to try and tilt others' perspective for on things towards being more aligned to be more in line with his (own) hidden plots and goals.
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Thanks, teechr.

Could you please explain to me, why "tilt others's perspective for things towards being .." is wrong?

Appreciated.
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It's not wrong. It's just unnecessary.

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