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Surfer Posted 13 years ago
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Adam's always-prolonged pursuits for the cheapest prices is not a marker of some effort with him towards saving, but rather indicates some sort of an obsession with him. He literally ends up paying more down the line as expenses for transportation add up along, and the longer his search goes, the more his loss is, in terms of time, effort, and money.
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Would you please take a look at the following text for me?
Adam's always-prolonged pursuits for the cheapest prices is not a marker of some effort with him towards saving, but rather indicates some sort of an obsession with him. He literally ends up paying more down the line as expenses for transportation add up along, and the longer his search goes, the more his loss is, in terms of time, effort, and money.
-How would you rate from 10?
-Do you agree on the punctuation?
Thank you very much.
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Surfer -How would you rate from 10? 5 Surfer Do you agree on the punctuation? It is over-punctuated because it has not been edited and revised for clarity, brevity and directness.
- Surfer -How would you rate from 10?
- 5 Surfer Do you agree on the punctuation?
- It is over-punctuated because it has not been edited and revised for clarity, brevity and directness.
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Surfer-How would you rate from 10?5
SurferDo you agree on the punctuation?It is over-punctuated because it has not been edited and revised for clarity, brevity and directness.
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