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Surfer Posted 13 years ago
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Hello everyone.
Would you please take a look at the following text?
A- Tell me about you office.
B- My office is a rectangle-shaped room resultant from the division of a previously bigger room. The big room used to be the office for one of the managers at my workspace, but he later moved into another room as he was re-assigned a different department. When the room became available they thought they'd bring together the IT staff in it and, as such, thought they'd be better off if they divided the room into two and allocated one part for the ladies and the other for the men. To that end, they installed some sort of a partition across the room that extended from wall to wall and was aligned properly so as to ensure two equally-sized parts were produced.
Can you pleasy give my your rating of(from ?) 10?
Thank you very much.
Would you please take a look at the following text?
A- Tell me about you office.
B- My office is a rectangle-shaped room resultant from the division of a previously bigger room. The big room used to be the office for one of the managers at my workspace, but he later moved into another room as he was re-assigned a different department. When the room became available they thought they'd bring together the IT staff in it and, as such, thought they'd be better off if they divided the room into two and allocated one part for the ladies and the other for the men. To that end, they installed some sort of a partition across the room that extended from wall to wall and was aligned properly so as to ensure two equally-sized parts were produced.
Can you pleasy give my your rating of(from ?) 10?
Thank you very much.
Top answer
Yours gets a rating of 5, as being only half edited. My office is a rectangular space partitioned from a larger room, the former office of one of our managers, who moved to another department. When his office became available, they thought they'd put the IT staff in it, allocating half for the women and half for the men, so they installed a wall-to-wall partition to create two equal halves .
- Yours gets a rating of 5, as being only half edited.
- My office is a rectangular space partitioned from a larger room, the former office of one of our managers, who moved to another department.
- When his office became available, they thought they'd put the IT staff in it, allocating half for the women and half for the men, so they installed a wall-to-wall partition to create two equal halves .
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Yours gets a rating of 5, as being only half edited.
My office is a rectangular space partitioned from a larger room, the former office of one of our managers, who moved to another department. When his office became available, they thought they'd put the IT staff in it, allocating half for the women and half for the men, so they installed a wall-to-wall partition to create two equal ha
My office is a rectangular space partitioned from a larger room, the former office of one of our managers, who moved to another department. When his office became available, they thought they'd put the IT staff in it, allocating half for the women and half for the men, so they installed a wall-to-wall partition to create two equal ha
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SurferBut what's half edited?Your original draft by you. As you can see, I cut the other half out, which you should have done in order to get a 10.
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