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Surfer Posted 13 years ago
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I'd normally prefer to live in an apartment that's within a residential complex than to live in an independent house, as it's usually quieter and more peaceful as a result of the common understanding amongst all residents that this is a shared building in which many apartments share the same single space and for which the slightest of noise may disturb the integrity of the peace.

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You might want to break it up into a few sentences. Reading such a long one can be tiring.

  • You might want to break it up into a few sentences.
  • Reading such a long one can be tiring.
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You might want to break it up into a few sentences. Reading such a long one can be tiring. Emotion: wink

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