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Surfer Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Proofread
Hello everyone.
Would you please proofread the following for me? I'm writing to someone I know who was supposed to call me and never did:
It's just that I thought a matter of mine would be as much important to you as in to find two minutess of your time to make that phone call. But then I guess it wasn't your fault I had my expectations set high, was it now?
Thank you.
Would you please proofread the following for me? I'm writing to someone I know who was supposed to call me and never did:
It's just that I thought a matter of mine would be as much important to you as in to find two minutess of your time to make that phone call. But then I guess it wasn't your fault I had my expectations set high, was it now?
Thank you.
Top answer
It seems too rude. Perhaps you should calm down and re-write it.
- It seems too rude.
- Perhaps you should calm down and re-write it.
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It seems too rude. Perhaps you should calm down and re-write it.
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Mister MicawberIt seems too rude. Perhaps you should calm down and re-write it.We'll do, Thank you MM.
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Surfer I'm writing to someoneI'm past that now, matter is over. However, I'm really still interested in knowing whether there are any mistakes in that writing, especially in the way I used as:
"..as much important to you as in to find two minutess of your time.."
Appreciate your help. Thank you.
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It's just that I thought this matter of mine would be important enough to you that you would find two minutes of your time to make that phone call. But then I guess it wasn't your fault that I had my expectations set too high, was it?
There you go. Now the bitchiness comes through like it should.
There you go. Now the bitchiness comes through like it should.
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