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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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When it comes to college students drinking alcohol and taking drugs, the author insists that if guns were put into the mix then it would be much worse. However, why is she is assuming that guns will always be used? What about other dangerous weapons that are not firearms, such as: knives, baseball bats, hammers, and swords.

is the "that are not firearms or that is not"
also the punctuation, correct?
  

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Bastian7 that are not firearms You have it right, but that clause isn’t necessary. Other dangerous weapons is sufficient. Bastian7 punctuation The colon is wrong, and you need a question mark at the end.

  • Bastian7 that are not firearms You have it right, but that clause isn’t necessary.
  • Other dangerous weapons is sufficient.
  • Bastian7 punctuation The colon is wrong, and you need a question mark at the end.
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Bastian7that are not firearms
You have it right, but that clause isn’t necessary. Other dangerous weapons is sufficient.
Bastian7punctuation
The colon is wrong, and you need a question mark at the end.

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