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Chalermkhwan Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Proof reading "Reason for leaving" please.

I am filling an online aplication form and I have to state the reason for leaving from my part-time job, as below. I'm not sure that my grammar is correct.



"It was the starting of new semester with more subjects I had to attend.

So I was would like to concentrate more on my studies."



Thank you for correcting my writing. This website is so meaningful for me.
  

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"It was the beginning of a new semester and I had an increase in subjects to attend. "

  • "It was the beginning of a new semester and I had an increase in subjects to attend.
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"It was the beginning of a new semester and I had an increase in subjects to attend.

I needed to concentrate more on my studies."

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