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김성현 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Proof-reading Please

Dear teachers,


Please proof-read the following 2 sentences:


1. When you sign up for our Personal Notification Services, we need only an e-mail address-which we use to send the information you requested.

-> Which one is better between (a) and (b)?

(a) When you sign up for our Personal Notification Services, we need only an e-mail address, which we use to send the information you requested.

(b) When you sign up for our Personal Notification Services, we need only an e-mail address which we use to send the information you requested.


2. Amazon.com may release account information when we believe, in good faith, that such release is reasonably necessary to 1) comply with law, 2) enforce or apply the terms of any of your user agreements or 3) protect the rights, property or safety of Amazon.com, our users, or others.


Which one is correct between 1) comply with a law or 1) comply with the law?


Thanks and best regards,


David Kim

  

Top answer

1. -> Which one is better between (a) and (b)? (b) When you sign up for our Personal Notification Services, we need only an e-mail address which we use to send the information you requested.

— Mister Micawber

  • 1.
  • -> Which one is better between (a) and (b)?
  • (b) When you sign up for our Personal Notification Services, we need only an e-mail address which we use to send the information you requested.
  • A.
  • 2.
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???1. When you sign up for our Personal Notification Services, we need only an e-mail address-which we use to send the information you requested.-> Which one is better between (a) and (b)? (a) When you sign up for our Personal Notification Services, we need only an e-mail address, which we use to send the information you requested.(b) When you sign up for our Personal
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