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Hello all, could anyone assist me in correcting my motivational letter for undergraduate degree. (XXX- School, XYZ- Country). Any urgent response will be highly appreciated.
Inviting me for an entrance examination in XXX is a dream comes true!!!
During my days in high school, I was a member of Red Cross which had made me to learn how to prevent illness as well as how to handle a people in danger. I was opportune to attend some training and it has really improved the passion I had in caring for people. I took the work on taking care of my grand mother for 5 years after my high school. I knew when to bath her, give her all the necessary care she needed. I was very observant in noticing any changes in her so as to report to our family doctor. I knew when to take her for long walk whenever I noticed her feeling bored. I was able to do all these for her because of the passion I have in taking care of people, so I decided to take Nursing as a profession.
I know its not an essay task to be a Nurse but I have decided to face all the challenges as well as to learn all the necessary skills like ability to answer some questions, dealing with emotionally charged situations and to be able to work with multi-disciplinary teams like (doctor, pharmasict, physiotherapist and so on) and all other skills.
I will appreciate an opportunity to develop my potentials in Nursing. According to my research, XXX had produced more than 100 professional Nurse with high qualities of skills which had made them stand out among other schools. An opportunity to this Institution will allow me to learn in an international environment as well as expose me to different culture as it’s very important in Nursing. I will try all my best to represent this school everywhere in the world has I am ready to learn to achieve my goal.
As XYZ is a country that so much appreciates good health. XYZ governments don’t take the health of her citizens for granted. I believe this is the best place for me to learn and develop my dream. Studying in a well organized and healthy environment will make my dream come to reality.
Hello all, could anyone assist me in correcting my motivational letter for undergraduate degree. (XXX- School, XYZ- Country). Any urgent response will be highly appreciated.
Inviting me for an entrance examination in XXX is a dream comes true!!!
During my days in high school, I was a member of Red Cross which had made me to learn how to prevent illness as well as how to handle a people in danger. I was opportune to attend some training and it has really improved the passion I had in caring for people. I took the work on taking care of my grand mother for 5 years after my high school. I knew when to bath her, give her all the necessary care she needed. I was very observant in noticing any changes in her so as to report to our family doctor. I knew when to take her for long walk whenever I noticed her feeling bored. I was able to do all these for her because of the passion I have in taking care of people, so I decided to take Nursing as a profession.
I know its not an essay task to be a Nurse but I have decided to face all the challenges as well as to learn all the necessary skills like ability to answer some questions, dealing with emotionally charged situations and to be able to work with multi-disciplinary teams like (doctor, pharmasict, physiotherapist and so on) and all other skills.
I will appreciate an opportunity to develop my potentials in Nursing. According to my research, XXX had produced more than 100 professional Nurse with high qualities of skills which had made them stand out among other schools. An opportunity to this Institution will allow me to learn in an international environment as well as expose me to different culture as it’s very important in Nursing. I will try all my best to represent this school everywhere in the world has I am ready to learn to achieve my goal.
As XYZ is a country that so much appreciates good health. XYZ governments don’t take the health of her citizens for granted. I believe this is the best place for me to learn and develop my dream. Studying in a well organized and healthy environment will make my dream come to reality.
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