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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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He decided to try the same tactic and next week brought similar gifts. That was a motivation factor for workers that immediately immerse themselves and despite of calls from supervisors they secretly worked for him.
  

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He decided to try the same tactic and the next week brought similar gifts. I cannot understand the second sentence.

  • He decided to try the same tactic and the next week brought similar gifts.
  • I cannot understand the second sentence.
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He decided to try the same tactic and the next week brought similar gifts.

I cannot understand the second sentence.
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Sorry, do you understand now?
He decided to try the same tactic and the next week brought similar gifts.
Gifts were a motivating factor for workers, so they immerse themselves in the job and secretly worked for him, despite of calls from supervisors.
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These gifts motivated the workers to concentrate on (devote themselves to) their jobs and they secretly worked for him, despite of calls entreaties from their supervisors.

The part I don't understand is if the workers secretly worked for him, how did the supervisors know?
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Ok. Please read now.

Whenever I think about project management, I recall my friend's story from the time when he had been working for E-Company and wrote his master's thesis. He waited a week for technicians to install a new generator per his instructions. When he asked them why the job had not been finished, they told him that they had not had enough time because of a lot of tasks impose

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