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Welkins2139 Posted 20 years ago
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The crowd filled up the court room. They came here to witness an explosion trial. The defendant was Francon. He blew up the building which belonged to Wayne's The State prosecutor said that the defendant was a dangerous man and he should be put away for life in order not to menance to our society. Francon did the crime because he founded out that Wayne was having affair with his newlywed wife. A month ago, Francon hired a private detective to investigate his wife's suscipious behavior. With the photos, it was sufficient to prove that his wife committed an adultery. One photo showed that she was wearing Wayne's pajamas, another, kissing passionely on each other.
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Hi, I've high-lighted places you need to make a correction. Best wishes, Clive The crowd filled up the court room. They came here to witness an explosion trial.
- Hi, I've high-lighted places you need to make a correction.
- Best wishes, Clive The crowd filled up the court room.
- They came here to witness an explosion trial.
- The defendant was Francon.
- He blew up the building which belonged to Wayn e's The State prosecutor said that the defendant was a dangerous man and he should be put away for life in order not to menance to our society.
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Hi,
I've high-lighted places you need to make a correction.
Best wishes, Clive
The crowd filled up the court room. They came here to witness an explosion trial. The defendant was Francon. He blew up the building which belonged to Wayne
I've high-lighted places you need to make a correction.
Best wishes, Clive
The crowd filled up the court room. They came here to witness an explosion trial. The defendant was Francon. He blew up the building which belonged to Wayne
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