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Welkins2139 Posted 20 years ago
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Usually, the doctor talked about his theory how to cure patients. The meeting was interrupting when Ben was yelling that he was tired and sicked of listening the theory over and over again. He got up from his chair and was about to leave. Then, the nurse gazed at him. The rest of the patients did that as well. No one had ever dared to walk away the meeting. When two guards came to ask Ben to be seated, he became violent and knocked one of the guards down. The another guard flinched and stepped back. Instead of agitating Ben, the nurse crooned him down. The patients turned their eyes to Damon who had strongly disliked the nurse's strict rules. The nurse had been with the hosptial over twenty years. She had ruled the ward with iron fist though she looked like a diminutive figure. Patients scared of her because she could send a patient to electrical treatments at any time she wanted to.

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Hi, I've made various changes, but I've tried to keep your words as much as possible. best wishes, Clive Usually, the doctor talked about his theory on how to cure patients. The meeting was interrupted by Ben yelling that he was tired and sicked of listening to the theory over and over again.

  • Hi, I've made various changes, but I've tried to keep your words as much as possible.
  • best wishes, Clive Usually, the doctor talked about his theory on how to cure patients.
  • The meeting was interrupted by Ben yelling that he was tired and sicked of listening to the theory over and over again.
  • He got up from his chair and was about to leave.
  • Then the nurse stared at him.
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Hi,

I've made various changes, but I've tried to keep your words as much as possible.

best wishes, Clive

Usually, the doctor talked about his theory on how to cure patients. The meeting was interrupted by Ben yelling that he was tired and sicked of listening to the theory over and over again. He got up from his chair and was about to leave. Then th
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A coupleof slight changes, mostly typos--

Usually, the doctor talked about his theory on how to cure patients. The meeting was interrupted by Ben yelling that he was tired and sicked of listening to the theory over and over again. He got up from his chair and was about to leave. Then the nurse stared at him. The rest of the patients did that as well. No one had eve

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