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He stood at the desk, hearing each trustee's complain. Finally Alan gave in after being overwhelmed by the board of the director. He asked his deputy to take over and walked out the meeting. His head were down while he was walking past the sidetrack cafe. He felt for the first time that he had been defeated.

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He stood at the desk, listening to each trustee's complaint. Finally, Alan gave in, after being overwhelmed by the board of directors. He asked his deputy to take over and walked out of the meeting.

  • He stood at the desk, listening to each trustee's complaint.
  • Finally, Alan gave in, after being overwhelmed by the board of directors.
  • He asked his deputy to take over and walked out of the meeting.
  • His head was down while he walked past the sidewalk cafe.
  • He felt for the first time that he had been defeated .
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He stood at the desk, listening to each trustee's complaint. Finally, Alan gave in, after being overwhelmed by the board of directors. He asked his deputy to take over and walked out of the meeting. His head was down while he walked past the sidewalk cafe. He felt for the first time that he had been defeated.

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