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So far Indian subcontinent is concerned, the whole perceptions of beauty pageants changed and modeling redefined incredibly when the duo: sizzling Sen (Sushmita Sen) and amazing Ash (Aishwarya Rai) surprised the world by bringing both the crowns of Miss Universe and Miss World respectively to India in the same year 1994. Thereafter, modeling became the most aspiring profession by the teen girls preferred over other lucrative careers.

What the above two girls do good after redefining the modeling and beauty shows in India? Miss World 1994 Aishwarya Rai has arranged for her eyes to be donated posthumously to a cebtre fir care of the blind. Miss Universe 1994 Sushmita Sen has adopted a girl child to nurture her future. In a society, where ignorance and social evils still prevail and compelled some parents to get rid of female fetus , adopting a girl child by a spinster is a commendable job.

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As far as the Indian subcontinent is concerned, the vast perception of the beauty pageant has been notably redefined thanks to the incredible duo: the Sizzling Sen (Sushmita Sen) and the Amazing Ash (Aishwarya Rai), whom suprised the world by accomplishing the titles of "Miss Universe" and "Miss World" respectively and bringing the crowns home to India within the same single year of 1994. Thereafter, modelling has become the most prominent aspiration, over other such lucrative careers, by hopeful teenage girls. So what admirable deeds have the duo accomplished since their significant success in the Indian beauty industry?

  • As far as the Indian subcontinent is concerned, the vast perception of the beauty pageant has been notably redefined thanks to the incredible duo: the Sizzling Sen (Sushmita Sen) and the Amazing Ash (Aishwarya Rai), whom suprised the world by accomplishing the titles of "Miss Universe" and "Miss World" respectively and bringing the crowns home to India within the same single year of 1994.
  • Thereafter, modelling has become the most prominent aspiration, over other such lucrative careers, by hopeful teenage girls.
  • So what admirable deeds have the duo accomplished since their significant success in the Indian beauty industry?
  • Miss World 1994 - Aishwarya Rai - has arranged for her eyes to be donated posthumously to a centre of care for the blind.
  • Miss Universe - Sushmita Sen - on the other hand, has adopted a child; a commendable role in light of the social evils and ignorance that compel certain people to rid themselves of a fetus.
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As far as the Indian subcontinent is concerned, the vast perception of the beauty pageant has been notably redefined thanks to the incredible duo: the Sizzling Sen (Sushmita Sen) and the Amazing Ash (Aishwarya Rai), whom suprised the world by accomplishing the titles of "Miss Universe" and "Miss World" respectively and bringing the crowns home to India within the same single year of 1994. Thereaf

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