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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Hi, are these sentence grammatically correct?
1. A paranormal comedy film that revolves around three young guys who become good friends while they are trying to resolve a mystery which occurred at the bus stop in their kampong.
2. Three young men who meet at an old bus stop at their kampong become good friends as they trying to resolve the mysteries happening at the bus stop. A lot of negative things occur there including the appearance of ‘hantu’ Kak Senah. Things become even scarier when a young lady named Maya takes the bus in the middle of the night, and Abam, the bus driver, feels uneasy and doesn’t know how to cope with the situation. Who is Kak Senah and Maya? Why suddenly they appear in the kampong?
1. A paranormal comedy film that revolves around three young guys who become good friends while they are trying to resolve a mystery which occurred at the bus stop in their kampong.
2. Three young men who meet at an old bus stop at their kampong become good friends as they trying to resolve the mysteries happening at the bus stop. A lot of negative things occur there including the appearance of ‘hantu’ Kak Senah. Things become even scarier when a young lady named Maya takes the bus in the middle of the night, and Abam, the bus driver, feels uneasy and doesn’t know how to cope with the situation. Who is Kak Senah and Maya? Why suddenly they appear in the kampong?
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Who are Kak Senah and Maya? Why did they suddenly appear in the kampong?
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Thank you so much. Yes, I know something went wrong at the ending part. Just that I couldn't figure out what is the mistakes. Thank you for pointing out.
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