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Fuchsia Posted 7 years ago
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"Thinking back on it, it was in no way a wise behavior but I was always drinking sugary beverages at that time."
Could you tell me whether the sentence above sounds correct to your ears? Thanks in advance!
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Largely this is fine. Personally I would delete the word "a". Opinions on this may vary.
- Largely this is fine.
- Personally I would delete the word "a".
- Opinions on this may vary.
- Some people might like a comma before "but".
- "beverages" is somewhat formal.
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Largely this is fine. Personally I would delete the word "a". Opinions on this may vary. Some people might like a comma before "but". "beverages" is somewhat formal.
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