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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Pronoun use
Is the use of 'she' at the beginning of the sentence to refer to Nymia a proper way to word this sentence?
After she and Aoth provided Szass Tam and the other lords with full accounts of the Thayans’ two defeats, Nymia told them that Milsantos Daramos, the tharchion of Thazalhar, was bringing his troops to Pyarados to assist her in combating the undead marauders.
After she and Aoth provided Szass Tam and the other lords with full accounts of the Thayans’ two defeats, Nymia told them that Milsantos Daramos, the tharchion of Thazalhar, was bringing his troops to Pyarados to assist her in combating the undead marauders.
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It's okay if, say, you mentioned her in the preceding sentence. I prefer to mention the person's name before using the pronoun.
- It's okay if, say, you mentioned her in the preceding sentence.
- I prefer to mention the person's name before using the pronoun.
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It's okay if, say, you mentioned her in the preceding sentence. I prefer to mention the person's name before using the pronoun.
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Okay thanks, I know what you mean. So I should definitely go with this revision then? FYI- Nymia is the governor.
After Nymia and Aoth provided Szass Tam and the other lords with full accounts of the Thayans’ two defeats, the governor told them that Milsantos Daramos, the tharchion of Thazalhar, was bringing his troops to Pyarados to assist her in combating the undead marauders.
After Nymia and Aoth provided Szass Tam and the other lords with full accounts of the Thayans’ two defeats, the governor told them that Milsantos Daramos, the tharchion of Thazalhar, was bringing his troops to Pyarados to assist her in combating the undead marauders.
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